I haven't finished this piece (obviously). I hit a kind of slump in inspiration and I didn't feel like carrying on with this one just yet.

But it would be cool to get some feedback on the story so far, so I can hammer out any notches so far.

I know some of the content is a little risquée in areas. Like it or lump it, I'm afraid.

Also, I copy and pasted the content - but send an e-mail to *phoenixflamex@gmail.com* and I'll send you a PDF of the document (where all the italics and syntax are correct).